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« Thread Started on Jul 10, 2006, 8:04pm »		[Quote]
I've decided the medicine cat will fall in love with Dangersoul, who killed Whisperpaw and Thornclaw... Stitchedstar's daughter and mate. Though he doesn't know that every night the two meet eachother at the Moon Rock and speak. Soon enough, Starclan is silent to Devilclan because of the forbiddin love. Though before this all happens, a warrior (doesn't know who yet) will have a dream about the medicine cat and blood-lsuting rogue. Oh, and Dangersoul is not really in love with the she-cat.. He's just using her to get closer to her which gets her to tell him about Devilclan more and their weaknesses because of a terrible drought due from the hot green leaf. Then Dangersoul and the rogues attack Devilclan, killing many and severly injuring them. While the drought, the shortage of prey, and Starclan silent.. Stitchedstar loses it and says that starclan has gone againce his clan (like Bluestar did). Cats struggle to be loyal to their clan and Starclan..

Then, suddenly, the medicine cat figures out she's pregant with Dangersoul's kits after many cats are killed. Still no one knows that it was her that fell in love with him.. But when she tells Stitchedstar, he lets her stay but she may not be medicine cat anymore. All cats of Devilclan turn their backs on her and her two kits, one that looks exactly like Dangersoul and another that looks like her.


Suggestions and comments are appreciated. Also, the warrior who has the dream from Starclan about the forbidden love is needed! Desertwind is already becomnig medicine cat of Devilclan...
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« Reply #1 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:22pm »		[Quote]
Hmm, I like it. I'm gonna make a she-cat for the med cat position. In a bit, when I'm feeling less lazy. As for the plot, I like it. Perhaps at the end after the cat is shunned, she could go crazy and leave the clan, leaving her two helpless kits.

An attack sounds good, but perhaps a few less hardships on the clan. Normally a drought, famine and attack would whipe out a clan. Maybe just a bad drought and the attack? *shrugs* Ok, I'll go make my bio now. Who will become med cat after her? I could have Desertwind be after my she-cat....
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Re: Current Plot Idea
« Reply #2 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:30pm »		[Quote]
Runningpaw will since he's medicine cat apprentice.. ^-^
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« Reply #3 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:37pm »		[Quote]
can i be the medcat, scine i am the med cat??i think i am cause earlier, yuo said i could stichedstar
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« Reply #4 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:40pm »		[Quote]
Put you don't apply to the right position. You didn't even finish your bio correctly.
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« Reply #5 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:44pm »		[Quote]
were do i put apply?
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« Reply #6 on Jul 10, 2006, 8:46pm »		[Quote]
But*. Typo..
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« Reply #7 on Jul 10, 2006, 10:09pm »		[Quote]
Oh fun fun! I love it. Except I have to agree with Desertwind on all the hardships. It is a bit much.
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« Reply #8 on Jul 10, 2006, 11:33pm »		[Quote]
Okay. What should we take out then? ^^
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« Reply #9 on Jul 11, 2006, 12:36am »		[Quote]
Hmm did Desertwind mention a Famine? That may be a bit harsh.
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« Reply #10 on Jul 11, 2006, 1:12am »		[Quote]
What exactly do you mean by Famine? That Starclan is silent?
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« Reply #11 on Jul 11, 2006, 1:51am »		[Quote]
No, famine is like when prey is nearly or completely gone. Like for Farmers, famine is when their crops completely died out. And not just theirs but others all around them.
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« Reply #12 on Jul 11, 2006, 2:40pm »		[Quote]
Well, if there is a drought that there has to be at least a little shortage of prey.
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« Reply #13 on Jul 11, 2006, 4:58pm »		[Quote]
Yeah I suppose. I donno. Hmmm -thinks-
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